Comments on: Read More http://www.diyfreedom.com/liberty/read-more/ A Simple Common Sense Approach to Creating More Time, More Happiness, and More Success Thu, 24 Jun 2010 11:42:49 -0700 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Robert K http://www.diyfreedom.com/liberty/read-more/comment-page-1/#comment-163 Robert K Tue, 10 Nov 2009 18:57:34 +0000 http://www.diyfreedom.com/?p=23#comment-163 Here are a few corrections. "tahtyour" needs to be "that your". "ofa" needs to be "of a". If you're interested in some other, more in-depth, revisions I edited this as a Google Document and highlighted what I did. (http://docs.google.com/View?id=dgzd9j2m_35dff32dc8) Here are a few corrections.

“tahtyour” needs to be “that your”.

“ofa” needs to be “of a”.

If you’re interested in some other, more in-depth, revisions I edited this as a Google Document and highlighted what I did. (http://docs.google.com/View?id=dgzd9j2m_35dff32dc8)

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